Does the dragon juice actually bring people back to life? I expect that it does. Right now it's a tad complex as we established in an earlier draft that is true but only for Amelia, Sebastian, and Joe. I suspect that we just make it that dragon blood has restorative powers.
The structure is bonked. It feels wrong and when ya beat it out it's fairly obvious that the "moment of death" is in the wrong place. This is fixable.
There are a LOT of visual effects shots. Hoo boy.