It's critically important to remember the 5-step finale. It's the missing section of Save the Cat.
You are low on your Olja Hrustic. She was in Millennium Crisis. Oh, and Werewolf Women of the S.S. ;-)
The best (NSFW) Twitterfeed evah.
I'm 44 and up until now I thought that ponies were adolescent horses -- you know, between colts and horses...